Yoo Hongsang/ Improved language samples/ Tue 11-1

1. First, we made an appointment, met, and went into the restaurant. → First, I made an appointment with him to interview him for the purpose of getting useful information in relation with job markets. We met in Jongak, and went into the restaurant nearby for lunch. 2. This is amazing because many other friends of mine failed even in most of the document screening. → This is amazing because many other friends failed even in most of the document screening. 3. I also asked him about what his priority is in choosing the companies. He said, ''I want to go to the company that guarantees the working years until the retirement age.'' → I also inquired him about what his priority is in choosing the companies. He replied, ''I want to go to the company that guarantees the working years until the retirement age.'' 4. It is getting more and more difficult to enter the big companies due to the bad economy. → It is getting more and more difficult to enter the big companies due to sluggish market(economic depression). 5.  At that time, she was 'just good', not unbelievable or super excellent. → At that time, she was 'just good' but was not enough to be unbelievable or super excellent. 6. Probably, it is to safe to say that she has a big ambition. → Definitely, she has a big ambition. 7. This ambition woman top her priority on her family rather than her dream or ambition. → This ambitious woman topped her priority on her family instead of her ambition. 8. It was the biggest pride I have of all experience I had. →  It was the biggest pride of all the experiences I had.