tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5312347225760579712.post6821493914705099259..comments2014-05-27T04:45:59.446-07:00Comments on Intermediate Writing (2) fall 2013 3-4: Past Experiences with Writing/Tues.11AM/노윤서profjbhhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06809066317885065503noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5312347225760579712.post-49146329510548318122013-09-14T16:47:43.812-07:002013-09-14T16:47:43.812-07:00For your first question, I found some grammar mist...For your first question, I found some grammar mistakes like "writing in English is easier that writing in my first language," "opportunities to writing" and "difficult to expressed." It could have been much better without those mistakes. But I liked your logic and ideas that support your key point. <br /><br />For the second question, questions like "tried to make my professors be content,"the papers for classes are more official and have formats than normal writing" and "follow the outline that professor teach me" need to be corrected. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08186452687035008675noreply@blogger.com